Life-
So many expectations
Life-
So many boundaries
Life-
Like living in a box
People think that you can only go so far
People think you can't go beyond that box
What if we lived a life with no boundaries?
What if our box breaks letting all possibilities of meeting our expectations, possible?
I like what you are trying to do here. I thin ktowrds the end you change form in the poem, and it may be an improvement to keep a form, a cadence throughout. Cadence allows the reader to really establish that rhythm while reading, and that's where the musical element of poetry is found.
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