author's note: This poem is about what a true friendship is. It makes you think what real friends you have in your life. What inspired me to write this, was when I heard friends laughing in the background, having a good time. That made me think what really is a true friend?
What is a True Friend?
One who listens to you?
or one who trusts you?
What is a True Friend?
One who laughs with you?
or one who loves you?
What is a True Friend?
One who picks you up when you fall?
or one who cares about you?
What is True Friend?
A True Friend is always there for you
A True Friend never leaves your side
A True Friend cares about you
A True Friend will be with you now, and till forever.
What is a True Friend?
One who listens to you?
or one who trusts you?
What is a True Friend?
One who laughs with you?
or one who loves you?
What is a True Friend?
One who picks you up when you fall?
or one who cares about you?
What is True Friend?
A True Friend is always there for you
A True Friend never leaves your side
A True Friend cares about you
A True Friend will be with you now, and till forever.
I really like your poem Angela! This is so true. :)
ReplyDeleteWhile I agree that this is certainly true, to be a strong poem, you want to incorporate concrete images that cause the reader to conclude what friendship is. By only using the words that are ideas, it is difficult to drive home a memorable reading experience.
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